Could use some feedback on this bit about The Time Travelers

Do you like homemade husband and wife porn? (sound on imgur)

As the party was winding down Greg noticed his wife was missing.

I'm missing you, your wife doesn't deserve you, my love!

The best kind of sex involves a slut wife in the middle and 2

i'm the missing wife to your life; let's complete each other.

Missing the beach!!

Despite studies showing men and women fantasize about this...not

Despite studies showing men and women fantasize about this...not

Your wife loves to record when we fuck so you exactly what you

Despite studies showing men and women fantasize about this...not

look what you're missing by being with your boring wife!!!!